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| The Random Witness 2005-04-30 ch 1,   | intreging concept of the knot. tHis and knot work 5 are the ones i like most out of the knotwork series! (",)~trw |
| darkgemini4656 2005-03-10 ch 1, | this is the perfect metaphorical interpretation of life's muddled and numerous decisions...each choice is a new knot...and life goes on...the thread of life...thwarted and knotted into the many trials and tribulations...exellent...im exited to read parts 2,3,&4...cyanide |
| Arcane D. 2005-03-09 ch 1, | great imagery, I absolutely enjoyed this poem, keep writing Hip (mind if I call you that?)-ADD |
| whyt forest 2005-03-09 ch 1, | i'm glad i read the first of your Knot Work poems. this is really good. once again it has a really moving imagery that makes the reader empathise and feel it at the same time. the last line- unexpected and beautifully tragic. ~whyt forest ps. thank you so much for the reviews. |
| Mynix 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Well written and you can see the questioningg, the movement of the what is happening . etc..Well done :) |
| heffiji 2005-03-08 ch 1, | This is really nice. It reminds me of a character in a book I read once. She wove history though... |
| ThatJimguy 2005-03-08 ch 1, | I very much like the medafore, but an err in knot work isn't so bad. |