intreging concept of the knot. tHis and knot work 5 are the ones i like most out of the knotwork series! (",)~trw

this is the perfect metaphorical interpretation of life's muddled and numerous decisions...each choice is a new knot...and life goes on...the thread of life...thwarted and knotted into the many trials and tribulations...exellent...im exited to read parts 2,3,&4...cyanide

great imagery, I absolutely enjoyed this poem, keep writing Hip (mind if I call you that?)-ADD

i'm glad i read the first of your Knot Work poems. this is really good. once again it has a really moving imagery that makes the reader empathise and feel it at the same time. the last line- unexpected and beautifully tragic.

~whyt forest

ps. thank you so much for the reviews.

Well written and you can see the questioningg, the movement of the what is happening . etc..Well done :)

This is really nice. It reminds me of a character in a book I read once. She wove history though...

I very much like the medafore, but an err in knot work isn't so bad.