Abstract and nicely-written. It's a thinker's poem. Good work.

~Hazellin

Wow. Thats totally thought-provoking. I love it! ^.^

Wonderful work! you have a knack of coming up with very refreshing ideas in your poetry!Keep writing!=D

I love the poem. It really has some depth put into it. The personifications were great. Bravo!

can i say i have fallen in love with this one? >< thanks for your comment, it was a really good idea! but i wrote it for science class, cos we were doing something on colours and our teacher was bored! xD yeah. i like the way you phrase sentiments. ^^

Very powerful. Awesome imagery. Great job, Lowell! Keep writing!