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| Serendipitous Passage 2005-03-12 ch 1,   | This is awsome! So much emotion in it. Great job. Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor. |
| MoTownJo 2005-03-08 ch 1, | Despite your own doubts, this is actually not a bad piece of work. (One is usually one's own toughest critic, though you've probably heard that before.) I have to say, it is a pretty typical love poem, upset about a relationship that didn't work, but your words add a fresh twist to it. It's easy to read and understand, but with some colorful phrases thrown in as well. I think you have a very good potential here. Overall, nice job. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-08 ch 1, | very nicely written, the emotions and feelings were well expressed. good job~ keep writing! |