this is amazing! the lines are long, and it almost takes two breaths each, but the quality of the words with their syntax is musical as hell. theres almost an iambic rhythm in it, but it breaks loose at the perfect times. i loved the repetitions of certain phrases and the seeming paradox actions taking place. "Will hold Us safe when troubled waves will weave their fated Bane." pure magic, what can i say. keep up the fanntastincredible work! :D

love c.induced.

I loved the style of this piece. It had a very nice rhythm (sp?). You should write more poetry. You're really talented.

The start was quite deceiving...but it's really funny and sweet. And here is time for the traditional 'aww'... Aw. :)

I like this primarily because of the excellent rhythm/rhyming scheme. I like also your use of 3 (I think that's the term) in the second stanza i.e. "...is steel, silken, fair." The whole thing just works so well. And it IS rather enlightening so you've achieved your aim thereof! Cool!

It's the subtle things about a poem that catch you most and add the most effect. I love how you capitalize certain words. I don't know that just like hooked me in. Oh, and thank you so much for the review of the my poem, it meant a lot to me. :)

Oh. I like it. It's unique and a nice change from the stuff I usually read on here.

Hey! (It's Ceara Brede, other account.)

Ack! I'm scared by the first line. Yucky math stuff. Yah I'm going to admit, I don't get it. But it sounds good anyway.

Not only feel-good and intelligent, but the references are great, too.

oh, this is very unique! I like it very much!