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A. J. Weyler 2006-01-16 . chapter 1
This peice was very interesting. It had beautiful imagery. You're Canadian? I always thought Canada was cooler than the U.S. I think I'll move there someday.
CieloPanda 2005-11-27 . chapter 1
I'm still in Canada but I miss home...thus this one hits quite close to home. Very lovely imagery and whatnot that those English teachers make us look for...ahaha. In my speak: it's very pretty. Soft, gentle, everything home should be. Very lovely indeed!
Michael Dempsey 2005-11-21 . chapter 1
Aww this is excellent. It's so sad. When I read it I thought of a winter dawn, weirdly enough. I've never been to Canada before but your love for it you clearly demonstrate here. Well done.
StarryNightForever 2005-07-21 . chapter 1
I'M FROM CANADA RIGHT ON!
waitandhope 2005-07-11 . chapter 1
Oh, that's grgeous. It really makes me unable to wait for my trip to Canad this summer--Nice!
Zefskiy 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
Oh, I loved it.

(i've never been to Canada...)

This poem just seemed to have life to it... I don't know how else to say it.

And thanks for reviewing my stuff.
Fable 2005-05-04 . chapter 1
Hey, pretty poem! I really like the way it flows. And Chopin's music is great :3

Did you used to live in Canada?
Khaydarin9 2005-04-18 . chapter 1
There is something very musical about this poem (rightfully so, if it was inspired by music!). I was thinking of Satie's Gymnopedie No.1, one of my favorite piano pieces ever ... the images are so vivid and so crisp ... remind me to go to Canada someday :)
gloriousphoenix 2005-03-22 . chapter 1
This is a good poem. Its nice and peaceful.
aquamoon222 2005-03-09 . chapter 1
wow! That was so beautifully sad! It almost made ME miss Canada! I like how you wrote "specks of white..." instead of snow, it makes a nice touch to this poem. I can see Canada vividly through this poem! I like this, and i'm sorry you miss it so! Amazing work!:)
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