Very Good. You are a really really good writer. emotional!

WOW, so sad, why is it so sad? do you feel this? O GOD! If I felt that...wow. I'd die! Good Job, painfully beautiful...~aquarius piscies~

I hate how you write so good! And the different perspectives!! die die die! Just kidding... Anywho this is sad... :o(

It's suprising how you were able to convey such emotion in so few words. I'm not sure if this is a beginning of a story or what, but I liked it. Nice work, keep writing.

**Slave**