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Reviews For: A Flower Once Beautiful

GotinksX
2005-06-27
ch 1,
I thought this was all right. I was thinking this was going to be a long poem but it was a shorty. I feel sad for the flower than once was beautiful. Thats like my old lady Gaki Toki. There once was beauty in her but now its not. I hope she wont read this...if you do hahaha...i'm only joking. ^_^
Ivriniel
2005-03-12
ch 1,
This is very deep. A very beautiful and well-chosen image.
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