Wow, it's really good! I wish I was as good a poet as you...

Dude, this has got to be one of the more cryptic poems I've ever read on FictionPress. I mean, it's mysterious in that modern kind of way, ya know; subliminal messages and handfuls of allegory. Perhaps some people out there really know what it's like to have "gambled" your life away.

I loved it, though. And thanks so much for reading MOTH! I'll definitely be updating again ASAP.




~ARS

I like it.

That's pretty good. I like the dark, it's puzzling. Alotta emotion in that poem. I like it.

~*speechless*~ good job...just good...lol