^_^ Nice! It all flowed a bit together, maybe you could separate it into stanzas (re: if by any chance you're having formatting problems, I can help (just like someone helped me...))

Back to the poem: I enjoyed reading this, and the almost-bouncy rhythm conveys energy. You missed a comma in Line 11, I think, but it's probably just a typo.

Keep up the fantastic writing,

TTM

Aww... If I were to really go into this (as some people would), I could find a 'deeper meaning' and/or 'intenses symbolism.' But, I'm not. I'm just gonna stick with 'oh, what a nice, playful children's rhyme. How well-written!'

Keep up the great work,

TTM