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| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-10 ch 2, | REally mysterious. Maybe you could explaint hings a little better. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-10 ch 1, | Very descriptive and had a good flow to it. |
| WiredCrazyFrances 2005-03-10 ch 1, | OH! Good story! And I feel special because I know all of its secrets. Maybe because I've been living with you fo rthe past five weeks...hmm. Bwahaha...I'm so glad you wrote this! Now you need to write more in English so that I can understand haha! There were a couple of grammar things and word mix-ups, but not many and I'm very proud! Keep up the great writing! |
| Anotherlovesickteen 2005-03-09 ch 1, | That was so sweet but what does those spanish words mean? |