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| catseyeview 2005-04-28 ch 1, | sad but so heartfelt, nicely written. |
| addie pray 2005-03-08 ch 1, | Tragically beautiful. I loved the stanza with kiss/spat and hand/fist. Really well written poem, good job. |
| Pomaikai 2005-03-08 ch 1, | I love poems that rhyme, even for a little. Very poetic! |