Since you moved "Never Knows Best" to this account, I'm writing a new review. Anyway, this story is definitely worth two reviews! lol Well, this was a great piece of writing from two very talented FictionPress authors. The story seems so realistic, thanks to a great many details. And the transition between the two POVs in the very middle of a sentence is an excellent idea. Keep up the wonderful work!

Wow, I have to say that this story is definitely one of the best I've seen. I also give a lot of credit for you two for taking a break from your regular works to put this together. I mean, you guys had to talk about the plot with each other, chibi had to write her part, and you had to write the next... The one thing that stood out was the transition. I mean, I could tell the difference in the writing styles, and when it just switched in mid-sentence, it was definitely a manuver that paid off. It was flawless. Most writers end a paragraph for transitions, but here, you execute it perfectly in mid-sentence, and it's just so cool!I think a month wait will be well worth it to read another chapter of this. I can wait! Take your time.Keep writing!Peace out!