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Satan's Angelic Mistress 2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Um. Awesome. [=

I like that they don't have names. Can't imagine this story if they did, actually.

XD I feel like I should leave a longer review because it deserves it, but you know, there's not that much else to say other than: awesome. >
mangazan 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
That was so GOOD. I was really into it and expecting this horrible, depressing ending, and then you gave Man #1 his Man#2. It was so sad but oh, so well written and interesting... amazing job!
TopKat 2008-06-10 . chapter 1
This was so lovely. nice passage between old and young, loved the anonymity. Sweet, and kindof sad, (especially about the dancing) - i really loved reading this. :)
Lovedward48 2008-02-24 . chapter 1
I love it! Poor man #1. But he has luck he has man #2!!^^
Isidris Gry 2008-02-10 . chapter 1
The whole idea of this is cool. I like the play, pause, and stop included and that the man is watching his past like that. I'm glad they still have each other.
Duuude 2007-12-14 . chapter 1
OMGSH. This is really beautiful. I love the way you wrote it. It's really amazing. Agh. I love it. xD I can't describe it. Especially the play.. pause.. and stop at the end. Very unique.
Lovely.
i-see-faeries 2007-06-03 . chapter 1
Hm, interesting, and cute. ^^ Definately amusing. I don't quite get the ending though ...
magalina 2007-05-02 . chapter 1
oh, sad... But so nice to read. Great job. :)
Lady E 2007-01-21 . chapter 1
Fluff makes me want to break into song, and fluff dosed with realism makes me want to serenade you. Beautiful writing, theme, and use of that "dancing across the screen" motif. You have a knack for capturing so much in so little. Nice.
rivalovery 2006-07-15 . chapter 1
Wow... I love the whole play and pause repitition til it reaches stop... really, really clever. Love this. I think it's.. depressing, though. I love dancing.
Yoyo-chan 2005-10-11 . chapter 1
That's bittersweet. I like it but not in the fluffy way XD; In the "OMG that's so sad" kind of way. Jeez...
Rinna 2005-09-24 . chapter 1
Wow... this story is...powerful. I wasn't quite expecting the end. I can't decide if it's a happy or sad ending...maybe bittersweet would be a better word? Very good, though.
Ashye 2005-09-07 . chapter 1
wow, that's so happy and sad at the same time. I'm guessing some sort of accident happened and maybe his sister died and he was left all hurt from it? I don't know and i guess it doesn't really matter. I love how they're still together, but it seems kind of sad that he watches the tape like that.I really like it!
pneumothorax 2005-08-27 . chapter 1
I like it. Imaginative, quite simply written although it's obviously not, it reads that way, and a good ending.
chinotto 2005-08-26 . chapter 1
aww.. different, but interesting. i like it too :)
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