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RoseMage
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was so lovely. nice passage between old and young, loved the anonymity. Sweet, and kindof sad, (especially about the dancing) - i really loved reading this. :)
Lovedward48
2008-02-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! Poor man #1. But he has luck he has man #2!!^^
Isidris Gry
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseThe whole idea of this is cool. I like the play, pause, and stop included and that the man is watching his past like that. I'm glad they still have each other.
Duuude
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseOMGSH. This is really beautiful. I love the way you wrote it. It's really amazing. Agh. I love it. xD I can't describe it. Especially the play.. pause.. and stop at the end. Very unique.
Lovely.
i-see-faeries
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseHm, interesting, and cute. ^^ Definately amusing. I don't quite get the ending though ...
magalina
2007-05-02
ch 1,
abuseoh, sad... But so nice to read. Great job. :)
Lady E
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseFluff makes me want to break into song, and fluff dosed with realism makes me want to serenade you. Beautiful writing, theme, and use of that "dancing across the screen" motif. You have a knack for capturing so much in so little. Nice.
rivalovery
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseWow... I love the whole play and pause repitition til it reaches stop... really, really clever. Love this. I think it's.. depressing, though. I love dancing.
Yoyo-chan
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseThat's bittersweet. I like it but not in the fluffy way XD; In the "OMG that's so sad" kind of way. Jeez...
Rinna
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuseWow... this story is...powerful. I wasn't quite expecting the end. I can't decide if it's a happy or sad ending...maybe bittersweet would be a better word? Very good, though.
Ashye
2005-09-07
ch 1,
abusewow, that's so happy and sad at the same time. I'm guessing some sort of accident happened and maybe his sister died and he was left all hurt from it? I don't know and i guess it doesn't really matter. I love how they're still together, but it seems kind of sad that he watches the tape like that.I really like it!
pneumothorax
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Imaginative, quite simply written although it's obviously not, it reads that way, and a good ending.
chinotto
2005-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww.. different, but interesting. i like it too :)
polynesia
2005-08-06
ch 1,
abuseYay! Slashy one-shots IN A WEIRD FORMAT that makes me all...weird feeling inside. I have quite the vocabulary, ne? Next time someone calls me smart, I'm going to laugh at them... Anyway...I liked it. Sad in a way...but I liked it. It gives me the feeling that I'm the one watching the movie, not Man #1.
Solitudity
2005-08-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is good. I liked how you put in the pauses and the plays, and at the end, the stop. Very creative. :D

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