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| The Random Witness 2005-04-30 ch 1, | WOW!WOW! the first paragraph stunned me it all rhymed so well and it all fit and wow! this poem is great! it shows the confusion and the emotion and gets the point across. luv it! this is definatly going on me faves! ~trw |
| darkgemini4656 2005-03-10 ch 1, | wow...i like this one...i feel like writing a reply poem to this...that would be interesting...yuo...tell me wut u think...cyanide... |
| teen-angel14 2005-03-09 ch 1, | This could be so true if he knew... |
| heffiji 2005-03-09 ch 1, | This has that confused feeling that sometimes comes with romance, but it still expresses hope that things will turn out okay. That's what I got out of it anyway...Nice work. |
| Drow 218 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Very beautiful poem, it might be your best so far, nice rhyme, not too repeditive. Touching and feeling. Well done. E-J |
| Macca Lane 2005-03-09 ch 1, | briant it also kdn fo poitn s otu about hwo people do someoties like being in rleaisotnship a ltof rot he smyahty dmore tha anyhting else but that is briant part of a rleaispthip ahivng someone who guenty cares about you |