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ErgoSchmergo
2005-03-09
ch 1,
abuse"Did you think it fair Adam,To tell me just as I was getting over you,That you love me?The truth is Adam,After all you did to me,All I can think now,Is that there is no such thing as love,There is just obsession,Hatred and lust.That’s all I got from being with you.I lost a hell of a lot more."

My ex's name is Adam...freaky huh? but those last few lines are exactly how felt (and still feel) about what happened between us.
yourghost-cyanide-twoshots
2005-03-09
ch 1,
abuseThat must have been very hard for you. You have my sympathy. I hope that you realize one day that there is such a thing as love. Good luck.
Icy Blue Frost
2005-03-09
ch 1,
abuseWow... Thats deep, real deep. but you need to know, there is such a thing as love. You must not shut your heart to everyone, to everything. theres no reason for you to commit sueicide for just one guy. Re-open your heart to the light, which it once was.
Starlight Maiden
2005-03-09
ch 1,
abuseI hope this guy is in prison. And I hope you're in counselling.
dustytiger
2005-03-09
ch 1,
abusewow, very powerful piece, such a sad story, i can feel so much pain in this, just, wow, great work, really well written, thank you for sharing
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