Oh so piercingly beautiful. I can't get enough of your stuff.

Beautiful poem. I simply love the way you format it. It suits your poem. good work. Keep writing. God Bless.

"So bare in mind, your cracks are perfect". Cool line... very... inspiring... -pushes pending poem temporarily out of head- Anyway. I loved the format to this. So different, unique, creative, original- yes, I realize some of those words mean the same thing- I'm exhausted, dammit! Anyway (again, lol). My vocab definetly sucks when I'm tired. Anyway, anway, anyway- shesh, I spelt it wrong! Oh, well. This was great (loved the message) keep it up and sorry this review is so pathetic!

Hopeful conclusion and magnificently artistic layout. The repetition worked well, building up the (comfort) in the poem's tone. Brill.

so bare in mind... so bear in mind...anyway, interesting format, this is well written and was an enjoyable read.

I really like the format of this poem, you've given me some new ideas :p. Great write.

weird format but kind of cool... this was really different and I liked it

wow. I'm speechless. Brilliant poem. Very inspiring. Brava!

It was good and it had a good message but it did not have that good ryming thing most poems have