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| ItalianQT 2006-03-06 ch 16,  | abuseGood plot so far!! Can't wait to find out who is behind the posioning! Update soon! |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 16, anon. | abuseNow I wonder what is wrong. Maibe it's Aubrey, but family shouldn't do that to family. I liked how concerned Helca is. Update soon, great chapter! |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseI wonder who Lucius is...! And I feel about all the blue and white...they need some red to liven up the place! I also liked Fil...he's so cool! |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseI like the wedding. It was cute, even though short. I enjoy the Adiel is still vulenrable. I'm glad that he didn't expect everything to be fine and dandy after the wedding. |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 8, anon. | abuseI know how it is when something tastes great but you have to get over the physical look... I love Tallian, he's such a comic relief. |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseWow, those are a lot of siblings! I can't see Adiel having that many, maybe two or three. I can't wait til Helca and Adiel finally get together. |
| Rachel 2006-02-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseI am reading your sotry! It's good, so far. I'm loving Adiel, even though he seems very spoiled. |
| Prisoner-11 2006-02-13 ch 16, | abuseNu! The prince must be better! And you! You need to update! |
| Jabberwocky 101 2005-12-30 ch 16, | abuseYey! You updated! ^_^... obviously... *cough* Another great chapter! I'm glad Adiel isn't going to die... or should I say "you're lucky"? |
| Falconer Aysel 2005-12-24 ch 15, | abuseOH MY! Another short review, I'm in a hurry! Again, love it, and the SUSPENCE THE SUSPENCE, I don't know what to do with you and your lovely characters! I'm looking forward to 16-Aysel |
| Jabberwocky 101 2005-12-23 ch 15, | abuse... ... ... ... ... ... what the heck? You better write more soon! Poor Adiel! *angry fist* |
| Kakiryu 2005-12-22 ch 15, | abuseOh! Oh! I know! I know what happened! *jumps up and down* ...I won't guess and spoil it though, so... Anyways, I like the new update-atage. Can't wait for this steady flow or...whatever. ^_^; Well, keep it up! Write more, write soon, jsut write. Ciao. |
| Jabberwocky 101 2005-12-22 ch 14, | abuse^_^ I love this story. Adiel is so adorable! Great chapter! I can't wait for more... which should be soon, right? |
| Falconer Aysel 2005-12-22 ch 14, | abuseHeyla, it's been a while there, Becks! And heck ya, I'd be scared if he just up and said he wanted children! By the way, just a side note, but I REALLY, REALLY like the way you have them arguing and getting on each other's nerves. A lot of people would have had Adiel roll over and take it instead of freak the hell out of Helca by arguing, and I'm so happy you didn't do that. Arguing is the spice of life! And who is this strange Lucious person? I hope Adiel tells someone, I'd love to see their reaction. And Fil. (Nice name, by the by) Will he fall for Fil or just end up being really good friends? Or is Fil against him? I just love twisty things in stories. As Lone says, Write on!Aysel |
| Kakiryu 2005-12-08 ch 13, | abuseI like it. ^^ Adiel's cute. I have to wonder though...Is Lucius the same Lucius as Mr. Dancer? Heh. Sorry. Anyways... Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao! |