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| xHannahx 2005-03-21 ch 1,   | i told you it was good. this is just so WOW. well done dee, this is goin on my faves cos its brilliant! Han. |
| Relayer 2005-03-19 ch 1, | Wow that's lovely, great imagery and I like the sinister ending |
| Jamie Giacomelli 2005-03-15 ch 1, | excellent poem. love the vivid descriptions. good write |
| Dave The Fool 2005-03-12 ch 1, | really good, i love the description eg "an icy splinter form her shoulder piecres my heart". u have a great way with words. hope ur ok, tis best not to keep thsi things bottled up |
| born-again 2005-03-10 ch 1, | Wow, nice work. Especially like the line,"But the worst pain is one that doesn’t leave a scar." |
| Newman 2005-03-09 ch 1, | I can definatly feel pain here. You can always talk to me man. Good work though. |