Reviews for The Transformation

Becky27 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked the repetition of 'It's like an addiction' yes, but I think I may have enjoyed the poem more if you the ryhming was more consistent; every verse rhyming, or every verse chosen not to. I guess that would have effected the overall drama of the piece, but I still think that it would be an interesting idea to explore. Yeah. Other than that, I pretty much liked it.
Sagaciouspnay 2005-03-26 ch 1,	abuseVery well-written. I like the repetitions...shows the emphasis to ur poem. Great job! thanx for the lovely reviews!
Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-20 ch 1,	abuseaddictions. wow... i was thinking drugs at first, but now i think pure emotions ;) nice!
The Dark Fairie 2005-03-11 ch 1,	abuseHey, this is really good. I love it. Don't know you in person, so kinda hard for me to guess, lol.
Lucretia Baine 2005-03-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is surely one of my favorite things you've written. Ah, the transformation...And yes, I have guessed who each verse is about.