This is so evil. Thanks for the review.

kind of gave me a picture of a person becoming a dementor (harry potter POA)...i like it.~Liz

ok sad and good

I think I read this one, but never commented it, or else I relate to it really well, LOL. Sickening, eh?Anyway, I love the darkness you write with and how well written you are.

Vampire angst? Interesting poem.

This was a bit different from the others I've read. It goes from anger to sad. But you portrayed it excellently. I love that.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Very nice. I really like this one... If you made it easier to read by changing the format slightly, it'd be perfect. I love this one! 4.9/5

~Kupo~

... Wow.

me like

Nice. Shows the compulsory evil that dwells within each soul. We do evil things, yet we know them to be wrong.

good one

Wow...you are good! I like you free style, it's very flowish. As scary as some people might find poetry like this I quite enjoy it. Three thumbs up! ~ko

I really liked it. Especially the descriptivness of it. Well written.

Thanks for the review!

Best Wishes,Brittney

interesting and good...~Deadly Assassin

wow...veyr interesting. very dark...i like it. thanks a ton for being the first to review my 'Meeting the Dawn' story. i appreciate it!

im gonna go read more of your stuff. it all sounds very unique to me...