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| Eirien 2005-10-01 ch 1, | Haunting and very well written, your language is intense and perfectly gets across the emotions, the pain, the fear, the effort to keep the overwhelming memories under control. The poem reminded me of my "The wounded girl inside of me" which is also about dealing with memories of abuse. Btw thanks for your reviews on "Unicorn" and "The Unicorn", and sorry for not coming back to you sooner, I'm rarely on FP nowadays. I'll try to read some more of your works though, only I cannot promise when. I'm glad you could get some comfort from my texts. Let me assure you, God is that Unicorn, and I know this to be true, there is healing and restoration to purity, I have experienced it and others I know as well. May you experience it too. Love and blessings. Eirien ^^. |
| The Past Revisted 2005-03-14 ch 1, | This poem describes everything I know about you. I won't say if it's a good thing or a bad thing, but it's descriptive of your character. I am a person of my word. I made you a promise long ago. I fouled up on that promise, but, like all promises I make, I come through and make good on them, foul or not. So if you ever need anything from me, ANYTHING, you know where and how to reach me. |
| YoLo NoR 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Great job. I live in a land of fear, and go figure, I'm too afraid to change all that much about it. I am who I am and I'm not afraid of it, but when it comes to telling my life story, then I fear, of the looks I'll get. Great Job. |