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the missing piece
2005-03-09
ch 1,
Wow. That was amazing. I Love it. The imagery is spectacular! I also like how you kept the two meanings you talked about to yourself. I think that's important for a writer to do. But in my reading of it I got my own meanings out of it which are really interesting. Anyway, great job.
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