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| J.S. Lewis 2005-03-10 ch 1, | My sincerist apologies, as you are correct, that Ophelia is from Hamlet. |
| grim-dreamer 2005-03-09 ch 1, | I don't have an intimate knowledge of the painting, though I am aware of the legend and it sounds very grim and beautiful in your poem. ('As serenity surrounds my soul in this dark delirium', that line I like very much.) Would the repetition of 'faster' once or twice on separate lines help?? Or am I just in love with that word right now? Effective positioning of 'released'. |
| Thinker-Girl 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Its great and all, but Ophelia is from Hamlet, not Macbeth. |