i think i just fell in love with this poem. simply beautiful.

It's very simple, but you expressed so much in just a few words. Adding to favorites.

Bravo.

I like the shape of this poem, whether it was intentional or not. You're one of the few poets for whom I have a hard time finding something to criticize.

real sad.. sniff sniff..

it said so much- in so few words. i like it

haha cute poem.

well i finally found out who has been calling then hanging up on me u sly devil u, naughty boy u r. but seriously very good work i enjoyed this a lot. please keep R+R my stuff and check out Goat-Bunnie (they're on my fav. authors list) cuz i'll be posting some work there by the end of this week. and if u have time R+R mischevious productions 2 they have some hilariously funny stories and poems.

-Tha G.0.D.

wow. wow. wow. woa. wow. i loved it. it just had so much emotion and though behind it. at least thata's what i think. it was great! ^_^

SP

i can totally relate... great job

*chuckles to herself, shaking her head* I like this...it's so...I don't even know how to describe it. I think we've all felt like this at one time or another, wondering where our one true love is at the moment, as they are not with us. One day, you will find them, when you least expect it, in the person you would never think could be it. I did. Just keep looking and keep writing. I do enjoy reading your poems.

I like the idea of your poem. It's simple yet captivating at the same time. ^_^ You must really like this person a lot.