oh my god... this was absolutely amazing...I'm not a rap person even... just wow... absolutely amazing

*Speechless*

omg!omg! that wuz so dark! but, it wuz really good! someone should really make that video!

oh my god.

I like it. Hmm, I wrote something like this, but not as good.. about a boy being abused though. This is a major problem in our society and I'm glad you can speak out against it! And it'd make a good rap song.