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| attaasa 2005-04-02 ch 1,  | I've already read this poem, I think... Still, I like it! I don't think that the rhymes sound forced, they seem to work to me. I don't really understand the last line, it sounds a little strange to me... It sounds a bit like an oxymoron, the first part sounds like youre about to say 'only then can you ever be sane' but the last part says that you CANT ever be sane, so the whole thing says that only if you do this thing you can become insane, and then, why would you want to be insane? i dunno, this was long. I'm just telling you what I think... |
| dustytiger 2005-03-09 ch 1,  | great peice, i can so relate, i can't do sonnets so i admire ppl who can, thank you for sharing |