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| under estimated artistsoul 2005-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseDifferent and good until the last line, it sounds like you should contitue it on more. I really like the beginning. |
| forbidden passion 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseanother good poem, good job, when my mom died last year someone told me "time will heal" it hasn't for me but i hope it will for you! |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseSimple and to the point - but still very good. You captured all the things that actually happen...though I never actually saw someone die...O but I did see a dead body before...um...long story. |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuse...you already know what I think, but I'll tell you again. You did a great job, don't worry about improving it (unless YOU feel it necessary), cause it was just awesome, and I loved the summary...so true. Morbid Maxwell |
| AllyCred 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abusei love it...so powerful...the wording is great and shows great sadness and pain...very well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| dustytiger 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abusei like it a lot, and can kind of relate, great work, thank you for sharing |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot. It had sort of (in my own wierd opinion) a bit of a rhythm. I hope you'll write again soon! |