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| Mephistophilis 2005-05-12 ch 1,   | *blinks* wow... deep... *whips tears away* This is good! >.>; Mine aren't THAT good! Xb It's great! Don't let the fire die inside!! ~`~Meph~,~ |
| Devil6667 2005-05-06 ch 1, | I know how you feel in this poem... and... i really like it... a lot |
| forbidden passion 2005-03-30 ch 1, | i loved this, it sux to lose someone close to you, sorry for your loss, but awesome poem! |
| Getuie 2005-03-27 ch 1, | Losing people is such a difficult thing to deal with... if not -the- most difficult. You've kept this poem only touching the surface of the emotions one could feel... the similes you used are well chosen. I hope you find comfort for your grief. |
| poetic abortion 2005-03-23 ch 1, | This poem was very powerful and I can smpathize with you. :( My aunt died two years ago and my great grand mother recently passed away. :( It said to see you loved ones go, its almost painful at times if you were especially close. ;^; Beautiful, powerful and raw poem. ^-^ Well done!! You surely have talent in this area. O.o But how should I know? XD; I've only read one of your poems so far. ^^; Yet I still say: You have talent as a poet. ^-^ !~* Noelle *~! |
| Callipygian 2005-03-10 ch 1, | It's very good, i was hoping it would be longer though, but i still love it good job. |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-03-10 ch 1, | I'm sorry about your uncle. I hope you feel better. Also I liked this one too - I think the words for this one was even prettier. |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-03-10 ch 1, | Oh, sorry to hear that love. I have never seen a...human family member pass, but my cat, who I loved so much, died in my arms and my first rottie had to be put down...and just two weeks apart. I hope you get better soon love, and I'm so sorry for your loss. Morbid Maxwell |
| AllyCred 2005-03-10 ch 1, | i like this, its always very difficult losing someone...my boyfrind just recently lost his grandfather and i tried to be there for him as much as i could but it was hard but i could relate coz i also lost my grandfather a couple of years ago...but very well done...the emotions in this are very well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-03-10 ch 1, | LOVE IT! Please write again soon! I'm sorry about your uncle. |