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| Shimmering Tear 2006-08-23 ch 1,   | I gotta give it to u, it's pretty deep!! It's my like of things! Very well written, I really liked it!! |
| Dawn369 2005-04-06 ch 1, | I liked it very much. You could probably weave a storyline around this poem. A dark, mysterious story. You should write more. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 ch 1, | I love this. It reminds me of having an addiction you love to hate. I think we all can relate in some way to this poem, even if it is in the most intricate ways. Great piece. Beautiful. |
| momijigirl 2005-03-10 ch 1, | OMG! I love it! I didn't know you listen to Evanesance (sorry if I spelled it wrong)I love their music! |
| Kuroi-hime 2005-03-10 ch 1, | i liked it |
| Lauderdale 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Amazing. I've clicked on three poems so far and they've all been angsty. What a party, huh? Bleh ... " ... I just kinda stared at the screen and wrote." Wait. So do you even know what your poem is about or are you just stringing gloomy-sounding words together to make it SEEM poetic? Anyway, it was an okay poem, nothing really remarkable about it to me. |
| Jarrad Silvermoon 2005-03-09 ch 1, | That was awesome! Good JOB!I really enjoyed it simply because it flowed so well together. Also, the beats are in a pattern which is both easy to read and is graceful. Keep it up! |
| Desert Illusion 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Whoa...I gotta say, lil' sis, this is really good! Totally contradicting how you really are in real life, but that's the beauty of a writer. You can write about ANYTHING! You don't necessarily have to be feeling it or experiencing it in any way, but you just know how to express it. You've def. got that quality in you! LOL! I am so proud of you! *big hug* Heheh! Anyways, I'm glad you uploaded this. (Thanx for giving me the credit, btw *winks*) Heheh! KEEP WRITING! =) Love you!-Baji. |