|Reviews for It|
| Oracular Echo 3/17/05 . chapter 1
Hm...repetition works, of course, and the end included a slight twist that helped us to understand what the poem was about. Very simple, and by no means eloquent, but somehow clever.
| Suz4eva 3/16/05 . chapter 1
Interesting. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy
| Thyrt 3/16/05 . chapter 1
ah ok..i really didn't get this until you said to replace it with something else..this is cool
| Joey7691 3/15/05 . chapter 1
Very good points. Well written.
| penname1920 3/15/05 . chapter 1
haha i really just want to go stomp on things now!
| cowsgoquack 3/15/05 . chapter 1
that was good..I laughed.
| AllyCred 3/15/05 . chapter 1
very good this was well written and just good...i like it. lots of love AllyCred
| this is britt 3/15/05 . chapter 1
heh, this would make a good song to mosh too. and then at the end, it makes much sense.
| Princess-anna57 3/14/05 . chapter 1
I am so impressed! This is such a creative piece! Wow, i'm so impressed! Keep up the great writing!Thank you very much for your reviews!Love Anna -xoxo-"Be honest to yourself and anything can be possible".
| Armas Apple 3/13/05 . chapter 1
Wow! I really like the repetition!And also the last line that says to replace the "it" with "the awful bad habits" Man, that is so creative! I love it!
| sheZadey 3/12/05 . chapter 1
your weirdness doesnt end does it? : -p