Lovely. _

Hmm...never seen a poem 'bout this...though it may not be apparent to everyone exactly what you're talkin' 'bout... Very descriptive, nice usage of repetition to create a point. All in all, good job. _

Nice, great use of repetition, very clever, haven't read anypoems about this before and I have to say I'm impressed! x weasel within x

Hm. I... didn't quite get this. The descriptions are a testimony to the fact that you do know how to write, maybe I just... have no idea what you're talking abuot...