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Nature's Glory 2007-06-24 ch 5,	I waited until the last chapter to review the "blog-story" since theyre all small chapters. Note: I'll do my best to keep any form of homophobia out of my review and I will try to be as fair as possible. shrugs I know, I'm an ** for being homophobic, cant help it tho...it weirds me out a bit! 1st, Awesome idea with the blog style. Very different and very cool. 2nd Also thought it was cool with the lists of love and hate and how they changed over time - good trick >) 3rd The blog titles are awesome! Lol each one made me laugh. 4th So your saying that all those responses from Black Cherry, Guy Upstairs (Ronen - aka you) are all real? That musta been cool to write up! 5th So every girl goes thru the gay stage? I don't suppose theres a particular time of age it happens...? shrugs again 6th Not a fan of too much metal on a girl's face, but i dont mind one or two things. I wuda figured after he found out he was gay, Amnon would put Cucumbers on his "Things I Love" list. >) I kinda expected one of the bloggers to be you (err Ronen) in disguise, but for some reason I didn't think it was Guy Upstairs. I guess im dumb, eh. Hey! some of us straight guys arent THAT bad either. Most of us don't go around planning to rape a girl at a party lol. Thats just desperation :\| Man, drunk wet Ronen kissing a naked Amnon; i think id have to kill somebody if that happened to me... Now im gonna impart with you something personal, but I think you may find something in there meaningful. In Chapter four - July - When Amnon talks about How he loved the IDEA of being in love, as he explains it, ill say the same happened to me a little while ago. BIG DIFFERENCE - I havent had any gay experiences and I know I love Caroline...just can't get with her right now or else it will ruin everything i have with her... No more speak from me. I took up too much of your time with this big ** review. Good job with this new style of writing! Good thing about this is you cant have any writing flaws because its actual people talking >)
Nikolomagne 2005-05-31 ch 5,	HOLY ! THAT IS ONE OF THE COOLEST PLOT TWISTS I'VE EVER SEEN! (The thing about Ronen at the end... WOAH). Well I think it ended quite well, although I'd probably be lynched over here if anyone found that out. A bit sexy, I'd add. Yup. Lynching. Michal is definitely a complete . I know how it can be with the whole falsifying thing. She must be really depressed inside if she wants to bring down everyone with her and project like that. I really liked this story and I think you did a wonderful job. Go you. ^_^ Over and out, ~Nico
Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-31 ch 5,	He was "The Guy Upstairs"?!?!?! OMG!! I would have never guessed. How cool is that! Ah this so rocked. I'm happy with the way it ended. Very, very happy. I bow down to you! Whoo-hoo! Write.Write.Write!
Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-05-27 ch 5,	:happy squeak: Best ending EVER. :glomp: Absolutely lovely~ :does the first review dance:
Nikolomagne 2005-05-13 ch 4,	Again, your ability to maintain this semi revolutionary writing style is amazing. I really like it. ^.^ I like how Amnon can pour out his feelings ont an online journal and people can reply to it with their opinions. It's like a synopsized novel without all the extra meaningless crappy detail that is used to fill space. Bell's ringing. Gotta go. ~Nico
Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-05-12 ch 4,	Damn, if he were real and a friend of mine, I'd be saying, "Oh, honey..." and breaking out the big guns--cookies, strawberry lemonade, and all. But since he's not real...YOU GET THEM! hands basket of goodies and comfits Worst feeling ever, realizing that it was an idea and not a person you loved. Because it's so ** easy to love an idea... It never betrays you and often gets better as you go along. And then it all comes crashing down like a house of cards.
Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-12 ch 4,	Ah and Michal has disappeared from the "Thing I love" list. I really really loved that. I love all of the confusion Amnon is going though. Hm...I think he'd be good with Ronen. Beautiful! Update soon. Oh and glad you liked the update and..haha AYINA! Yeah - I meant for the fight to be a bit out of description. Personally I wanted to make it really cool and with all this feeling but - Ayina didn't want that. He tends to have a boring tone unless he's REALLY into something and he was really disappointed in that 'fight' so he's very boring about it. But oh don't you worry he'll be getting in a fight with someone else later on. Hm...that should be fun... AGAIN LOVED IT! UPDATE!
Nikolomagne 2005-05-01 ch 3,	Ugh... this Michal chick is really being a *. shudders* I know exactly how it feels for something like that to happen... people like that love to rub things in your face. They deserve to be shot. It looks like Amnon is getting really confused and jumbled up in his emotions recently... ugh, poor guy.
Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-01 ch 3,	Haha - Ronen wasn't on his last Thing I Hate list!! How cute is he! I really like Amnon! I don't know why but I really want to hug him! Eh how cute...! Update.
Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-04-29 ch 3,	Yay, an update from you! Makes my day no matter how rotten it might have been. ^_^ I love Amnon's lists, they're so funny (and true--justin timberlake is gay) No wonder he has so many commenters though, his life is more interesting than most of theirs... (more interesting than mine) Oh, but I needed this! ~today is a good day for being tally~
Nikolomagne 2005-04-18 ch 2,	Wow. Amnon's life must really suck. Michal sounds like a complete **. u_u However, despite all the depression, your titles are still funny as hell. I like this type of literature a lot. The lists show how the character develops over time. Awesome idea. ^_^
Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-08 ch 2,	Ah I love you! Your so cool! Seriously though - you have the greatest ideas and the coolest sense of humor. I loved this...And I so love Amnon. Oh and I'm going to try and send you more pics. ^_^
Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-04-06 ch 2,	Still reading this (how stupid of me to review before finishing!), but I had to write that I laughed my head off at the comment about Dorit having once been kind of fat. And, "Back off!! This boy be MINE!" XD Who is this guy? Aw, that's all? Damn.
Dying Without Gackt 2005-03-13 ch 1,	Ah - that was awesome! I love Amnon - he's so cool! I loved the whole style and everything - It was so sarcastically funny - Yay you rock!
Nikolomagne 2005-03-13 ch 1,	Woah - that's quite an innovative writing style you've created here. I like it. You know, you are pretty funny when you're **. Some of the blog titles made me laugh out loud, like "love is spiritual diarrhea" and things like that. It was a good comical relief amidst all the sad and depressing things. You conveyed a lot of emotions very well through this piece of work and I think it was very creative. Excellent use of vulgarity, by the way. No one can string cusswords as elegantly as you can. Awesome job. ~Nico

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