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Damaged
2006-04-11
ch 1,
This poem broke my heart. I've been in this situation and been to the point of thrusting the blade through my throat ... but been interrupted. You did a beautiful job with this poem; I commend you. Keep up the beautiful writing!
Chris-no-Baka
2005-03-19
ch 1,
wow, that was really good. amazing even. i am honered that you think that my poetry is worth reading. oh, and i have to say, i also think that evanescense kicks **.
Gothic Spook
2005-03-10
ch 1,
I love it! Very deep and full of emotions! You got the sense of inner pain across really well! Well done! Brilliantly written! I particulary (sp?) like the unusual rhyme sceme!
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