Whoa, this really makes you think. I really like the first line. :)

As I reread this I keep on thinking about it more and more... This is really good!

Great job!

The Clapper

Not bad. I would recommend adding punctuation, though. I like the part about chances the most because it's true.

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simple, but elegant. Very true

Thats really good, it's simple but it explains a lot about what someone's view on life could be.

Great haiku, keep writing!

Lurid

That was a great haiku! One of the best I've ever read! I loved it! And it was so true in many simple ways! Keep up the good work!

Thank God! _ Someone thinks the same thing about life as me!

Nice haiku, quite true about how life is.

thanks for your review on my poem!

yea I'm too lazy to sign in _

I liked this. even tho I don't read Haiku's but uhm yea I really liked it :)

aw... thats so truecute haiku

keep writing!

I love this! The first line is my favorite, "Life is a moment". That's so true. This is one of my faves.

i really like this haiku. of all of your haikus this is my fav. um... i hate to ask but could you review some of my friends mischevious productions poems/stories and the rest of mine. also if you spread around the word of our stuff we'll do the same for you.

-Tha G.0.D.

very true