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| Manna Banana 2005-05-17 ch 1,   | I love this poem it reminds me of a certian person. not saying who some of the rhymes in your other poems are kinda simple and dont really go with the theme but the ones in this poem are simple in a good way they make the poem easier to understand and more special and it makes it so it just sticks with you. Theres probably a word for that like remember but whatever.. youre really good but everyone can improve so keep working. Cheers! |
| dustytiger 2005-03-10 ch 1, | wow, great peice, i very much relate to this, i feel the same way right now, i feel some pain in this, hope you feel better soon, thank you for sharing |
| Eriathien 2005-03-10 ch 1, | I like it, simple but well put. The second stanza is definately the best one. |