expressions are undenyable, and a smile can lift you up:)Way to goDorien

I love it, it is just so sweet simple and honest, I applaud

great piece, very sweet and inspriring, thank you for sharing

It is the nature of our species, we have so many sub concious reactions to things, maybe that should be worked into this poem in a non obvious way, just an idea to help improve but it may need sum research. dont be afraid to research your works!

Nine Iron