Nice.

I enjoyed this story. It was well written. ^^ ~adds to fave authors list~ later!

YOU are going on my favorite author's lists.

you are amazing. I normally hate anthro or catgirls in general, mainly for my horrid past with them in fanfiction. -__-; I loved this though, it was just so strong and emotionally gripping. the characters had life in them and the yuri bit isn't bad either. **hint, hint** do write more in the future, you are positivly fabulous,

~* as beauty dies

Whoaw, I must say... I was reading this whilst watching Red Dwarf, and I hardly paid any attention to it because of this short story...

It starts really well, very descriptive to give the best idea of the scene and the characters within the scene.

Just the amount of description that went into the happenings within the scene, the thoughts of the two characters and their actions was immense... It left no gaps in my mind as I read it from the start.

I also liked the contrast of how you described the two characters' feelings whilst at the apartment. I liked the descriptions that came within that scene...

And finally... I would really like to commend you on the final scene, it was very snug... The style of scene that put a smile on my face because it was very descriptive and was very fitting for the mood of the scene.

So Emma, I liked it! no, I loved it!Great Work... And I can't wait to read more of your work... =^__^=

:: claps :: Yeah! I like it

Awesome. Fanntastic. Love it.

Is it a one-shot?

Of not, PLEASE keep it going.

Hee... you already know what I think of this fic. Very good. ^__^ Like I said, Cute and Sexy. Like yo- *shot* x_x

But seriously, I am impressed. Even more so considering that you made it so both of them thought that they were the ones in 'control' of the situation anmd that it was their own personal plan that made all that... stuff (^_~) happen. XD

That, and it's HAWT. I need to read more of your stuff. ;_; Especially the yaoi ones.

I can't believe I just read catgirl yuri. Wow. ::blinku:: Actually, that was pretty cute, a little short on plot, but hey, who cares? It was decently written piece of fanservice, and I'm all for that. I think a little more work on visual description would be good, also, a lot of the time you're just stating things--it's better to 'show' them through description. Anyways keep it up. I hope your friend enjoyed this!

XD Oh god I cracked up while reading this. ^//^ This was well written and had a nice flow to it. Not bad and you have a good chice of words. ^-^ Great job keep it up!!

!~* Noelle *~!

oh-la-la...::still sweating::It's written beautifully.

"You probably shouldn't be sat here in the rain" shouldn't it be sitting? I don't know, Maybe it's because I'm not a native english speaker and that's why it sounds weird to me ^_^

But it's a great fic, you threw in just the right amount chilli. I liked the ending very much. "They were very much the cats that had got the cream"...heh

A truely remarkable story Emma, so full of detail, i am amazed by whatever you do. All i have to say is keep up the good work and thankyou for the story ^.^

Nice 'cat/cream' thing at the end - I like that. It's also very sweet, and quite the kind of thing you'd sometimes like to happen to you, isn't it?

The purring also adds to the sexuality - which is the whole idea of a smutfic *smiles*

Detailed descriptions mix in with the palette of emotion to make a well-cooked piece of meat that is your fic.

In other words... I like :-) Good one - as always.

~Steve~