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| Sappheire 2007-12-17 ch 5,  | golly, don't go all emo on me, child. hehehe te amo!! this is good as always, nice to see you getting back to this. i mis you! umm yes. it is late. and i have my spanish final tomorrow.funfunfufn. not. bye. leeny |
| Skeeter the Groundhog 2007-12-17 ch 5,  | aw, my crazy pish, this is a sad one, but very true. me likes the last 3 lines the best. |
| Skeeter the Groundhog 2007-07-03 ch 4, | i've always loved this poem, you know that? i am guilty of having a facebook though. whatever, it doesn't rule my life. okay, it does help rule my social calendar a bit. oh dear. anyway... though it's true. not everyone can be unique. like some people try so hard not to be goth or punk or preppy or whatever, yet judge people that way. or they try so hard to be anti-this and that because if you can't be put in a box, then you're unique, right? except everyone is trying to be that. |
| Me 2007-07-03 ch 4, | Like this one a lot. |
| son of frost 2006-02-07 ch 1, | Wow, that is a very eloquent and insightful poem. I like the way the poem flows, and the use of inverted sentences "are they not?" (among other Yoda-like phrases). Truly inspiring. P.S. Thanks for the review! |
| Epic BeezlebubCH 2006-01-13 ch 3, | I liked this one. Really good with the rhyming, as it's especially hard (for me, at least) to do good rhyming poems. ~eb-ch |
| im too lazy to sign in 2006-01-13 ch 3, | gut, gut. ca, c'est un tres bon poeme. elle me fait penser des personnes populaires a notre lycee. ehk. ces personnes sont si betes. encore, c'est un tres bon poeme. ecris plus! |
| Skeeter the Groundhog 2006-01-12 ch 3, | and the last line is "you". it rhymes, and it's talking to people who sacrifice themselves to be like everyone else. |
| Kathleen 2005-08-14 ch 1, | wow...that's awesome-hey, be proud of me i finally figured out how to comment:) |
| Rei 2005-06-05 ch 2, | very good it ryms without rymsing |
| Epic BeezlebubCH 2005-06-04 ch 2, | So THAT'S why the cheerleaders stole Irene's soul...none of them had one...hmm...=0) Awesome poem. It's just like how some people are. ~eb-ch |
| im too lazy to sign in 2005-06-04 ch 2, | deep. |
| Epic BeezlebubCH 2005-03-10 ch 1, | So true. I know about the kind of people you're talking about. =0) ~eb-ch |
| Rei 2005-03-10 ch 1, | YOU ARE GREAT AT FREE VERSE! MORE!Rei |
| eponine who is too lazy to ... 2005-03-10 ch 1, | HA! WE ARE BETTER THAN ALL OF THEM! okay, im calm, really. i kept waiting for you to burst into popular, it was that descriptive. you write good poems, write more! |