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| broken-devil 2005-03-10 ch 1,   | It takes something for me to leave a review, but for this piece, I must. The way you describe things are perfect. Very sensual. I dont see it as twisted, but thats just me. I would love to be the individual this poem is speaking to. |
| account not in use 2005-03-10 ch 1, | Wow...Twisted, sensual..amazing. |
| darkpaladin13 2005-03-10 ch 1, | Wow, that was really great. Good depth, detail, description. It was so vivid and very creative. You did a great job, keep it up. |