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| reader 2008-07-11 ch 20, anon. | abuseOh, it's so sad that the twin girls died! BOTH? :( And it had to happen to MARSHALL, too. *sigh* Realistic addition, though, I guess. Thank you so much for posting this story! I really loved reading it. |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 18, anon. | abuseOh! Wow! Actually almost fatal! None of that "good thing the bullet just grazed my shoulder" business. PLUS A BABY OMG. No morning sickness? So jealous. |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseAH OMG. OMG. Okay, this is exciting. By the way, I thought that Shay already had basic training with a knife and self-defense? So, this was just more intense training? Onto the next chapter! THANK YOU! |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 16, anon. | abuseThanks for finishing the story; that's really nice and responsible of you. And I'm really enjoying it!! |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 15, anon. | abuseWOW that was hardcore. WOW. So, the only real suggestion I have is that it'd be nice if you put the name of the person who's narrating at the beginning of their section. Unless it's your intention to leave the reader in the dark for a bit? It's a little annoying. |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis chapter was NOT that short!! It was really a nice length, AND it had a good ending point. :D P.S. I love your story! |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseOH my god, I love this idea! This is a really interesting beginning. Thank you so much for making this story about this "big-boned," tall girl instead of some typical small and delicate fit-under-any-guy's-arms girl. 178 is such a realistic number! Perfectly in the weight range for her height, too. THANK YOU. |
| UnRequited Dream 2008-01-17 ch 21,  | abuseI just read your story straight through and I loved it! I'm a Texas girl, so horses and cowboys can always hold my interest! Looking forward to reading another story very soon! ~Lizzy |
| atreyu love 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusesounds interesting; |
| Katie 2007-10-10 ch 4, anon. | abusei must say that i had a nice, long, hard laugh upon learning they were going to kentucky. [: i think i feel like a hick now, not sure though. but at least i dont live in the hicktown part of ky. its good so far, and im going to continue reading now. |
| a monday survivor 2007-09-09 ch 21, | abusei would so read the second book. |
| LIZABETH MERCADO 2007-07-23 ch 21, anon. | abusehello...beautiful and nice story...please write the sequel...thank you... |
| atreyu love 2007-03-02 ch 20, | abuseinteresting. lol, i think ive read this before :] oh well. |
| atreyu love 2007-02-18 ch 4, | abusem |
| abc123 chewy 2007-01-17 ch 9, | abusei seems really... chrsitian |