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Reviews For: Fate Rides the Midnight Train

Profiterole
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuseAh! The sadness of what-could-have-been-but-wasn't! This is so well-written, you're a really talented author. Trains / train stations are a really good plot bunny in your hands.
BlueRenamon
2005-04-13
ch 1,
abuseSo deep. A pure emotion; finding love, and in the same instant, being torn away from it.

Remarkable work
Nelania
2005-03-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is such passionate writing! Not your usual. It really just leaves the reader with one question:

Who is she? You'd better tell me, lol.
unerasable words
2005-03-11
ch 1,
abuseWow. One of a kind. Well done, the imagery is perfect! I can just imagine myself watching this whole scene again and again in my head. It's so bittersweet. Excellent.
rainbowskye
2005-03-10
ch 1,
abuseAh, wow. It's so wonderfully and beautifully descriptive. And happy, because they met, yet so sad as they were parted. *sniffles*

The style really works well, and the first person. Brilliant!
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