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| Profiterole 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseAh! The sadness of what-could-have-been-but-wasn't! This is so well-written, you're a really talented author. Trains / train stations are a really good plot bunny in your hands. |
| BlueRenamon 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseSo deep. A pure emotion; finding love, and in the same instant, being torn away from it. Remarkable work |
| Nelania 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is such passionate writing! Not your usual. It really just leaves the reader with one question: Who is she? You'd better tell me, lol. |
| unerasable words 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. One of a kind. Well done, the imagery is perfect! I can just imagine myself watching this whole scene again and again in my head. It's so bittersweet. Excellent. |
| rainbowskye 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseAh, wow. It's so wonderfully and beautifully descriptive. And happy, because they met, yet so sad as they were parted. *sniffles* The style really works well, and the first person. Brilliant! |