Reviews for Alive Without You

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Travis C. Eckert 2006-09-28 ch 1,	This is just cold, but its nice and all. Also as a reply to your last review, I am for the most part sure this is before I had a interest at all in anyone in particular, though I might have, I do not think I did. But yeah I know I have a lot of marry me things. Thanks for the review, I am hoping for more exchanging reviews.
Leaving Here 2006-08-13 ch 1,	lol i love this line : What are you? Stupid? lol... i say this to my parents sometimes. yes mean, but ya, i know you did too! =] anyway-- i like the poem. like the last line. ~Liz
Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1,	hmm...interesting very interesting
keesa 2006-04-07 ch 1,	wow.. I can so completely relate to thisI really love your writing style.excellent job bravo
Needa S 2006-02-17 ch 1,	The ending summed this piece up nicely. Awesome write.
ShadowYellowEyes 2006-02-16 ch 1,	I really like the beginning, with the similar beat and sentence structure, but then it falls into more of a prose than a poetry. Even so, the last line is one that burns into the memory, which is what makes this poem very powerful. This also is open enough for interpretation. I like it. ~Shadow
Calliope Foster 2005-12-27 ch 1,	Wow...that was a heart breaker! Your little usage of punctuation is also a really good expression within the poem. Good work! And forgive me for my late response to your reviews for my work!
TheLastKiss 2005-12-13 ch 1,	First of all, I love the title, it definitely grabbed my attention. I loved the sense of feeling used in this work. And I especially loved the last line. Great job! Thanks for the review! Best Wishes, Brittney
Pretty Peaceful 2005-11-19 ch 1,	thanks for the review. well done on this, its from the heart and its how i feel about a lot of things.
BJ Worth 2005-11-09 ch 1,	Good poem, I'm definitly feeling the angst. People don't realize what they do to us, do they? P.S. I moved my poems to my website, you can find them there.
ShatteredBlades 2005-11-07 ch 1,	Very well done. The last line definetly wrapped it up well. I love it.
Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-03 ch 1,	Wow, this has been my favorite at the moment. I like the last line the best, it really wraps this up, especially after all the anger at the beginning. Harlequin~Please fix me...
Tikklz 2005-10-27 ch 1,	I liked the last line the best...it just kinda hit me. "...so I can be alive without you..." Really great.
Patricia Louise 2005-10-13 ch 1,	I love this. Emotional emptiness. Great!
Abby Sequioa 2005-09-01 ch 1,	amazing, interesting, and strangely sad but still up-lifting... beautiful

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