Reviews for the lower quartile

AboveTheSalt
2005-03-28
ch 1,

Ah. Love this. Reminded me of the Holocaust when I first started reading it, then turned modern society. How uniform we are, how impersonal while still delving into every meaningless trival fact we possess! The end sums it up perfectly; we are all made to be the same. On a grammatical note, the last word (too) should be "to". The number of questions you asked seems a bit much to me, but the severity might be necessary for the full effect of the poem (though i'll admit i didn't read them all the first time through). The first stanza is wonderful, people as marks, like scratches on scrap paper. Loved the last, also. Really enjoyed this piece.

not sure yet
2005-03-22
ch 1,

i like this one muchly, very well written and interesting, great job

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