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| The-unimportant-item 2005-04-13 ch 1,  | abusewow... I really like this one... ~the-unimportant-item |
| Kiki*W 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI sortof see this having a rythem to it, like a beat. I like it, alot. |
| dustytiger 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abusegreat peice, i really liked, very powerful, i can relate, my only suggestion would be for the do i? no, to be on one line, for some odd reason it would give it more punch... the no's on the line alone just doesn't seem queit right, thank you for sharing |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's good, really like it. |