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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-30 ch 1,   | i'm really not sure what to think about this one! the bottle to me is like a bottle of feelings (ie. bottling up your feelings) and how one day someone will relaise that you're actually stronger than them and have made more of yourself and they should be ashamed of anything they ever did to you, which is why i'm a bit confused, the ending kina throws my theory out cause they're smiling... unless the feelings are ones which i guess you've kept from them, and they don't realise what's going through your head... sorry it's just me trying to over analyse! nice poem, makes you think (obviously) :) x weasel within x |
| SagaciousPnay 2005-03-21 ch 1, | Hey there! Junior year in my state is basically 3rd year of high school! Aw, it's cool u live in NZ...grades are called differently in many places -^_^- Thanks a bunch for the kind reviews =) |
| SecretAznJen 2005-03-20 ch 1, | Wow. I don't think I understand the meaning behind the poem, but I can tell it's really powerful. It seems to be very sad. Well... okay that was an easy one because it says "And I am sad..." LoL. But, yeah. It's really good. And thank you for reading some of my older poetry! The thing is that so many people overlook the stuff that I've written a while ago and it makes me a bit sad because there's some good stuff amongst all the gibberish. lol. Anyways, thanks again. And also, again, great poem. |
| The System Mother 2005-03-17 ch 1, | What... a strangely interesting work? Hm. Thanks for the review! |
| goldenone 2005-03-16 ch 1, | It sounds like it's about how sometimes the smallest things we do affect people more than we know. Just my interp.Thanks for the reviews, they made me smile. As I read them in my e-mail they got more and more excited and happy, and yeah, made me smile. Now I'm repeating myself.I have a quote for you from Steven King:"People ask me how I can write such horrible, fantastic stuff. I tell them I have the heart of a small boy, and I keep it in a jar in my desk drawer."Lol, hope you liked it. |
| M. R. Smale 2005-03-12 ch 1, | I really enjoyed this, it had a mysterious feel to it and such vivid imagry use as well. Keep up the excellent writings! |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-03-12 ch 1, | I just love your work. it seems so awesome because the words and the meaning to it flows perfectly. nice work. |
| Sagaciouspnay 2005-03-12 ch 1, | Impressive Artychick! I like your use of this back and forth feelings...i can definately relate! thanks a mucho for reviewing my works! Ur the best :) |
| dustytiger 2005-03-10 ch 1, | i like it so mysterious, so many things that it could be inturprted as, i take it as innocnence, great work, thank you for sharing |