Quite the ballad you've written, I enjoyed it a lot, but you probably shouldn't go by the word of someone who calls herself crazydragongirl on greatestjournal, lol. But personally, I enjoyed it immensely, I can't wait to see some of your other works.

Wonderful story! Quite humorous, and great ending without making it too tragic, too. hehe I really enjoy how the story-telling is done. Keep it up, this is precious. :D