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Xeronia 2005-08-26 ch 1,	What was this essay about? It seems more like a short story. There's quite a bit of repetition here as well...maybe you should put up the final draft instead; I don't (and probably the same with other reviewers) don't want to criticize a first draft.
Moonvoice 2005-04-15 ch 1,	I found this short story extremely touching, and I like your comparison of Ester's life to an old, soundless movie. It is very emotionally-packed and descriptive. I hope you got a good grade for this. ^^
jam 2005-03-14 ch 1,	haha, if i recall properly, I m one of the people who were stealing your essay...>.< Gosh...good piece of writing. Is it any wonder you're always beating me at essay writing? >.< Oh well... Overall...great job done, esp the descriptive part...but (I know I've mentioned this to you before) it's kind of 'no climax'...so, u can work on that a little! :D Keep going!
im Lichterglanz erstrahlen 2005-03-12 ch 1,	my dear fren u are fabulous. =) i love e way u use descriptive stuf. once im out of inspiration, thats it. haha..where u get all these from? cool mind uv got up there..alongside with e nose,backview and cheeks. haha. random neways..keep tt writing light ablaze! ps..tts wat my name means.