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| KD 2005-05-08 ch 1,  | tig repus artxe looc (: szipan o einm ! eheh [: |
| Delphian-Angel 2005-03-14 ch 1,  | Very powerful and emotional piece...brillient! The last lines that are like begging more than ordering really convey the pain that you must feel...overall an incredible piece of poetry. ~D.A~ |