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| Rah 2006-03-28 ch 4,  | Very enjoyable. There is also an element of suspense with the oncoming storm. I do wonder though what happened to Sarinas's necklace. I am wondering if it has been lost in the storm. If not, wouldn't Jacob have found it when she was unconscious?I do enjoy it though. Keep it up!! |
| La petite malaine 2005-08-08 ch 3,  | Great new chapter, very spicy, fun, quick, in other words, great.one note, "her frowning full unpainted ones." needs at least one coma, but two would be best I am thinking. "her frowning, full, unpainted lips." But it's up to you.Malaine |
| Deadly-green-snake 2005-07-31 ch 3, | hahahahaha. good one...can't wait to see what she does! ggreat chapter XD |
| La petite malaine 2005-06-13 ch 2, | admiring his butt, but hating him all the same. ~ don't you just hate that?Infuriating and gorgeous? Infuriate me?Nice set up and it is only too true that it is hard to be comfortable naked in someone elses bed, and eating only adds to the charm.Loverly,Malaine |
| La petite malaine 2005-06-13 ch 1, | o, lovely.i do assume that she will be learning some lessons in ettiquette. That woman was right, for a princess that was rather rude! |
| Forbidden K 2005-06-05 ch 2, | Aw! It's such a cute story, but at the same time funny! update update update! don't put it on hold :D |
| prancu 2005-06-05 ch 2, | great story so far, i hope you continue it soon |
| Deadly-green-snake 2005-03-25 ch 1, | aw, no one reviewed you! well, i'm here with one because i found time to read all of your stories. and YES i want to read more!! hope you can update soon! |