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| jctstorage 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abuseLOL Nice. Your rhythm fails in a few spots but overall you can certainly tell what you were aiming at. And it was just too humorous... Reminds me of a recent weekend jaunt to the Philly Art Museum. My comment: "I suppose if your name is Warhol even three brillo boxes can be art." >. |
| Goddess of the writings 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked the peom, although it had a small sounding to one of Edger Alan Poe's poems. I too have seen the Dead Poets' Society. great movie. Thank u for reviewing for one of my things. |
| INTP 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very clever--albeit somewhat clumsy--reworking of Poe's masterful use of rhyme from the poem, The Raven. It's very satisfying to see someone spear those ridiculous people who stretch their dull, vapid minds to create meaning in their lives (or, in this example, art) when there is simply none at all. The reliance on visual stereotype is particularly illustrative of that subculture. I admit I feel the same utter bafflement at these mental charlatans. |
| dustytiger 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abusei like this peice a lot, it made me thinks, great work, thank you for sharing |